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@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ individual. This is possible due to the distinction between infected individuals
 who are carriers of the disease and the part of the population, which is
 susceptible to infection. In the model, the mentioned groups are capable to
 change, \eg,  healthy individuals becoming infected.  The model assumes the
-size $N$ of the population remains constant throughout the duration of the
+size $N$ of the population to remain constant throughout the duration of the
 pandemic. The population $N$ comprises three distinct compartments: the
 \emph{susceptible} group $S$, the \emph{infectious} group $I$ and the
 \emph{removed} group $R$ (hence SIR model). Let $\mathcal{T} = [t_0, t_f]\subseteq
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ in its demise before it can exert a significant influence on the population. In
 contrast, an early and high peak means that the disease is rapidly transmitted
 through the population, with a significant proportion of individuals having been
 infected.~\Cref{fig:sir_model} illustrates this effect by varying the values of
-$\beta$ or $\alpha$ while simulating  a pandemic using a model such
+$\alpha$ and $\beta$ while simulating  a pandemic using a model such
 as~\Cref{eq:modSIR}. It is evident that both the transmission rate $\beta$
 and the recovery rate $\alpha$ influence the height and time of the peak of $I$.
 When the number of infections exceeds the number of recoveries, the peak of $I$
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ in the real-world is subject to a number of factors that can contribute to
 change. The population is increased by the occurrence of births and decreased
 by the occurrence of deaths. One assumption, stated in the SIR model is that
 the size of the population, $N$, remains constant, as the daily change is
-negligible to the total population. Other examples include the impossibility
+negligible compared to the total population. Other examples include the impossibility
 for individuals to be susceptible again, after having recovered, or the
 possibility for the epidemiological parameters to change due to new variants or the
 implementation of new countermeasures. We address this latter option in the
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ next~\Cref{sec:pandemicModel:rsir}.
 
 \subsection{Reduced SIR Model and the Reproduction Number}
 \label{sec:pandemicModel:rsir}
-The~\Cref{sec:pandemicModel:sir} presents the classical SIR model. This model
+The~\Cref{sec:pandemicModel:sir} presents the classical SIR model by Kermack and McKendrick~\cite{1927}. This model
 contains two scalar parameters $\alpha$ and $\beta$, which describe the course
 of a pandemic over its duration. This is beneficial when examining the overall
 pandemic; however, in the real world, disease behavior is dynamic, and the
@@ -366,18 +366,18 @@ they alter the definition of $\alpha$ and $\beta$ to be time-dependent,
 \begin{equation}
   \beta: \mathcal{T}\rightarrow\mathbb{R}_{\geq0}, \quad\alpha: \mathcal{T}\rightarrow\mathbb{R}_{\geq0}.
 \end{equation}
-Another crucial element is $D(t) = \frac{1}{\alpha(t)}$, which represents the initial time
+Another crucial element is $D(t) = \frac{1}{\alpha(t)}$, which represents the time
 span an infected individual requires to recuperate. Subsequently, at the initial time point
 $t_0$, the \emph{reproduction number},
 \begin{equation}
   \RO = \beta(t_0)D(t_0) = \frac{\beta(t_0)}{\alpha(t_0)},
 \end{equation}
 represents the number of susceptible individuals, that one infectious individual
-infects at the onset of the pandemic. In light of the effects of $\beta$ and
-$\alpha$ (see~\Cref{sec:pandemicModel:sir}), $\RO < 1$ indicates that the
+infects at the onset of the pandemic. In light of the effects of $\alpha$ and
+$\beta$ (see~\Cref{sec:pandemicModel:sir}), $\RO < 1$ indicates that the
 pandemic is emerging. In this scenario $\alpha$ is relatively low due to the
 limited number of infections resulting from $I(t_0) << S(t_0)$. Further,
-$\RO > 1$ leads to the disease spreading rapidly across the population, with an
+$\RO > 1$ leads to the disease spreading rapidly among the population, with an
 increase in $I$ occurring at a high rate. Nevertheless, $\RO$ does not cover
 the entire time span. For this reason, Millevoi \etal~\cite{Millevoi2023}
 introduce $\Rt$ which has the same interpretation as $\RO$, with the exception
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ defined as,
 \begin{equation}\label{eq:repr_num}
   \Rt=\frac{\beta(t)}{\alpha(t)}\cdot\frac{S(t)}{N},
 \end{equation}
-on the time interval $\mathcal{T}$ and the population site $N$. This definition
+on the time interval $\mathcal{T}$ and the population size $N$. This definition
 includes the epidemiological parameters for information about the spread of the disease
 and information of the decrease of the ratio of susceptible individuals in the
 population. In contrast to $\alpha$ and $\beta$, $\Rt$ is not a parameter but
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ variable $I$, results in,
 \end{equation}
 which is a further reduced version of~\Cref{eq:sir}. This less complex
 differential equation results in a less complex solution, as it entails the
-elimination of a parameter ($\beta$) and the two state variables ($S$ and $R$).
+elimination of a parameter ($\beta$) and two state variables ($S$ and $R$).
 The reduced SIR model is more precise due to fewer input variables, making it
 advantageous in situations with limited data, such as when recovery data is
 missing.

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